Your entry is fantastic, it's pretty close to what I had in mind.
Here are my final comments/updates:
1/ Swap color of hair of the 2 women: bride in blond, mum in auburn (I changed my mind)
2/ Remove the hair of the guy in suit (the suit is finally enought to distinguish him)
3/ Move the sun at the top left part of the image (I will put the title at it's current height)
4/ Baby: please color his clothes in white.
5/ Can you add a smurf bird (see placement in my comment on your entry)