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T-shirt Ask Me About

Added Lettering and Texture as asked . Hope you like it ;)

Contest Entry #44 for                                                 Handwritten Shaped Typography T-Shirt Design

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  • maxlife
    Contest Holder
    • 4 years ago

    LIKES
    I like the overall concept and the cleanness of the design. I especially liked the use of the dotted line to represent the timeline as it guides the order of reading the events.(just kindly cut the line before reaching William the conqueror - he shouldn't be part of the timeline in this illustration.

    I also like the consistency of the image style. (Can we reverse them though? So the images are filled instead of using outlines?)

    I like the added textures!

    I like the curved text for CC Homeschool Life and To Know God

    • 4 years ago
  • maxlife
    Contest Holder
    • 4 years ago

    FOR IMPROVEMENT
    - However, the focal point image needs to be related to one of the phrases to be used. Unfortunately, we can’t use the teacher image. Were you able to check the suggested crown and use that as the backdrop against the Ask Me About instead?


    - The Timeline of Human History is only one of the items (as well as William The Conqueror, Multiplication Tables 5s & 6s, 8 Parts of Speech, etc - but it's not the main headline for all of them. It should be the title of the timeline items on the dotted line. Maybe put the phrase The Timeline of Human History at the left end of the dotted line to signify that's where they should start reading the 'timeline'

    - Add small s after both 5s & 6s

    • 4 years ago