Freelancer:
jasongcorre
Public Clarification Board
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Contest Holder - 4 years ago
Lovely Sketch Mr. Jason. However, the lady is too demurely and conservatively dressed for playing the protagonist of an Erotica novel. I suggest you google up "Savita Bhabhi" or "bollywood sexy saree" to draw inspiration about the dressing style. A slightly thinner face could have also added to her appeal, I feel. But that is of course only an opinion.
- 4 years ago
