BobbleWobbles TV Show Pilot Bible

Hi. I have written children's TV scripts before, oddly enough the title I gave it was "Bubbles". That was a series commissioned here on Freelancer. Unfortunately, the client seems to have gone cold on it after three episodes and has not commissioned any more. I don't think this is down to the quality of the work I hasten to add as he has left good feedback (which you can check in my profile). Please do PM me and I can show you these if you are interested as samples of my work (written in collaboration with my sister who is Manager at a childcare Nursery here in the UK, who is invaluable from an educational input perspective). The fee is ballpark and I am happy to negotiate on that. Thank you for considering my proposal and I hope very much to hear from you. All the best, Mitch.

Hi, Thank you for the opportunity to bid on your project. I don't want you to fail when you pitch. I've just returned from the NATPE global television content market in Prague where I pitched my kid's formats to producers for 5 days. I know what they're looking for in a bible. Provided all your story development is done and it's strong, I can complete the bible for you in a week. If you need me to develop the bible based on the script, I can do that as well but it will take two weeks because I will have to extract the synopsis, character bios, plot outline from the script. Story development is my strength and I've written up bibles for a number of production companies and writers around the world. The main issue if you want me to write up from script is that the story in the script has to be fully developed. If I analyze the script and discover plot holes and weak characterization it will be impossible to write a great bible. I can't just fill in information because the bible and script won't match. As an act of good faith, I'm happy to give you free coverage on the script just to ensure that all the story elements are there, no strings attached. It will also be a practical demonstration of my ability. I would be happy to sign an NDA to that end. Once we are satisfied, the script can serve as a basis for the bible. If you share your email address with me I will be happy to send you my CV and a sample of my writing and the accompanying bible. Kind regards Ben Johnson