Hello:
I can er-write the content on your site in around six days, at least if I understand that you want the whole site's copy re-written. It's not all that bad, really. It is, however, awkward in spots, with some minor word choices that would need to be changed in some places. In others, you couldeasily shave off a few sentences. In most, though, it would be easiest simply to re-write (i.e., some of the descriptions of products) from the bottom up. I look forward to hearing from you!