Hi. I think that I am the right one for the job. I am a native English speaker, born, raised and educated in the US. I work as a freelance editor, rewriter, translator, and write grant proposals. In addition, I have taught English as a foreign language at the high school level and I am very familiar with the web. I am attatching a sample of my work as a rewriter from my previous bid. First you will find the original article given to me followed by the rewritten one.
Original: The EL 3000i Elliptical Trainer features eight preset programs, each with varying levels of resistance so that the user has total control over the intensity level of their workout. In addition to the preset programs, there are several fully customizable options. The heart rate control program allows you to enter a targeted heart rate that is kept constant throughout the timed workout as the machine automatically adjusts resistance to keep you at that rate. The heart rate interval allows the user to program a minimum and maximum heart rate target and then adjusts the intensity up and down throughout the workout to take advantage of higher and lower levels of intensity.
Additional features for this model include an integrated USB storage device which allows the workout information to be stored and then uploaded for online analysis. This allows the user to see how hard they are working, how well they are meeting their fitness goals and what they need to do to improve. Knowing this information allows the user to see more results in a shorter amount of time in many cases as well as keeping their motivation level high. There are built-in audio speakers and a headphone jack as well. Blue gel pads on each pedal make them even more comfortable to use.
Rewritten article: The Amazing EL 3000i Elliptical Trainer
The EL 3000i Elliptical Trainer features eight possible programs. Each program has varying levels of resistance which gives the user total control over the intensity level of his workout. In addition to the preset programs, the user is able to program the trainer according to his exercising needs. The many options make is possible to fully customize his session according to his needs. The heart rate control feature allows you to achieve a predetermined heart rate that is kept constant throughout the timed session. The machine adjusts itself to the appropriate amount of resistance to keep you at your desired heart rate. The heart rate feature allows the user to determine and set a minimum and maximum heart rate goal and then adjusts the intensity accordingly throughout the session, taking advantage of its ability to increase and decrease levels of intensity.
This model also includes a builtin disk on key which stores the all the workout session information for later use. If the user wishes to analyze or track his progress all he needs to do is plug the USB device into his computer and the data is all there ready to be manipulated and studied. This is the best way to find out if the user is working hard enough and meeting the fitness goals that he set for himself. In addition, you can see what needs to be improved. Many times seeing this information helps the user reach his goals in less time and at the same time keeps the motivation high. There are additional features contribute to making a workout a pleasant experience. There is built-in audio equipment and in order to prevent from disturbing others there is a headphone jack as well. The pedals are coated with gel pads to ensure that this model is even more comfortable to use.