Craig,
As a professional marketer and developer of businesses throughout the United States, I can tell you that your slogan needs to be quick, catchy, and less than three words. In essence, it should be the mantra of the very root of your business.
What I will do with you is contact you and have a brief 30-minute or longer discussion to learn about your business, talk about your vision, goals, products, services, and what you are trying to achieve, as your tag line/slogan should speak as to your vision of the company, not a generic term or words that are just mashed together, it's much more personal than that.
I would like to work with you, however, whoever you choose, do not choose someone who isn't willing to learn about your business and your vision. There are other bids that may be cheaper, but you'll get the three-word generic canned slogan that may not speak to your long term vision of the business.
Thank you, please let me know if you have any further questions.
Stuart Takehara