Editing a research thesis on "ASSET MANAGEMENT"

I have done a research thesis on a topic related to "Asset Management" and Its almost done from my side. The writing needs some 'series improvements on the Methodology and the Discussion' and therefore, i need some series freelancers with MBA background to work on them. The task involves the following changes and they are mentioned below clearly. 1. Modifications in the literature Review section ( expected word count 2000 words adding and formatting them as stated below) The sections in the literature review are not linked together . Different sections should be clearly linked together , meaning that when you finished one section, you should direct the reader to the next section , (they should not be isolated from each other) . Once proper link between sections are conducted , you can come up with a clear research problems and research gap (again you need to have a critical discussion throughout your lit review chapter) 2. Research Methodology: Research ,methodology section is written already but lacks some main parts. They need the following changes. You should justify the selected research methods, data collection and also analysis approach using appropriate references. You need to show the selected method/s will answer your research questions and how! If you have done survey, you should do a sampling, justify your research population ,etc 3. Discussion section comparing survey results and the literature review: This section also needs serious [login to view URL] is not effectively written and following changes are suggested) You should clearly show the analysis process and PROPERLY discuss what the outcomes of the analysis mean in an informative and critical format. Then link them to your research questions/objectives. The draft of the thesis will be given to freelancers who only have proper background. The task is expected to be finished in 5 days from the time of awarding. PLEASE NO NEW FREELANCERS AND NO CONTENT WRITERS/ WRITING COMPANIES. Only individual freelancers with MBA background is preferred.. IMPORTANT NOTE: 1. The milestone will be released only after the task is reviewed and it takes 2 days after the task is delivered. 2. The freelancer has to forward the work done on each day and failure to do so will result in termination of the project. 3. the price for this project is fixed at 300AUD Expected word Count for each section given above: Section 1- 2000 words Section 2 - 2000 words Section 3- 2000 Words